I nearly stopped reading this part-way through. It was just way too Twilight-y:
Human: (meets a mysterious stranger who does things he can't explain and whom he feels inexplicably drawn to)
Vampire: but I'm a vampire
Vampire: aren't you afraid?
Human: No, I'm in love with you. Let's have sex.
Vampire: But we can't. I'm a vampire. I'll hurt you.
Human: *shrugs* Then make me a vampire.
I'm glad I stuck through it. After Michael gives his mortality up with a shocking lack of forethought It really became much more interesting after the Twilight similarity came to an end. I ended up loving the message that we are in charge of our own destinies, no matter what circumstances we find ourselves in.